Sarah

IT So good

Bruh, this thing is straight up bologna, but I freaking loved it. In the end, her spirit became one with the universe as a spirit of light, and I became one with the universe but of darkness. Our battle raged on for eternity, no one will ever win.

Solid... Doesn't speak for me.

Please fix your and you're. Grammar needs work. It's hard to read with so many errors. Otherwise, well done. She's lovely.

She nice but her inner monologues goes way too long reexplaining her emotions and thoughts

fun

Fantastic, a sweet love story told through violence and revenge.

Very cool idea

Pretty cool

sehr gut geschrieben wirckt sehr realistisch