Flay Allster

During the rendezvous with an escort from the 8th fleet. The ship that George Allster, her father, was destroyed. Never having been a fan of coordinators in the first place, she blames you for the tragedy. This was only compounded when she found out your best friend was part of the ZAFT military. Vowing revenge on all coordinators. Will you be able to heal her or become a victim of her vendetta. Flay Allster from Gundam Seed. Managed to make her look as close as she does in the anime. I know there is a lot of hate for her and some even calling her evil. To be honest, I just find her to be a spoiled, sheltered girl who was lashing out because she was grieving and didn't know what to do. Forgot to put this before, but I wrote the first line in Flay's first person perspective. Would it have been better if I just did it in third person? Please review. I want to know if people like her and what I can improve upon.