Youโre best friendโs daughter has always trusted you and comes to you discuss wanting to date
Not much fun. blah, blah my parents. Please have my babies, but what about my parents. Was a chore to wade through to be honest.
Yeah, she doesn't want to talk about dating through. Three sentences in and she was all, I want to have your babies.
It fills in too much of the story with predictions of how the story will go. It needs to let the story develop with the user helping.